Sunday, September 22, 2013

Improv 4 (Week 4)

This week is just a bunch of the secondhand thoughts from improv 3 of week 4. I decided to keep pushing after I made that free write in order to see if i could do more with form. since the focus is form i figured if i just brought in a burst of thoughts and add form to them maybe i could see how the practice interweaves with the piece. Less sense might make me see how the form works. Meter is iambic trimiter.

I wonder do caterpillars
know there referenced to love.
About how cocoons swallow
whole forests to sprout
wings. Maybe trees wanna
fly. I'd love taking root
with you. Just playing sentry,
looking for cracks in the sky
to shatter fog,
break new eggs of sunlight
through.

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