Thursday, October 17, 2013

Improv. 5 (Week 8)

Improv. off of "Reading Plato" by Jorie Graham. More than anything i wanted to wrestle with the format of her piece and see how it would affect the shape of my draft.
                  

Do remember
             To fall
out of love the
          way fingers
print hopes on
          pages. That

Sisyphys carried
          the sun on
 His brow. Writing
          is as simple
as finding night in
         eyes.

Measure love by
        burning it at
sea and watch the
        flame flicker
lower, remember it
       Can't be. Skin,
a knit work of Mother's
       flaws. A collasped
lung is still a lung
       worth stitching.
         

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