More practice on the iambic meter in Improv. Going for trimiter to see if i can note the difference between iambic and trochaic.
Hacked by moths, an
overcoat rots in the attic.
Pall Mull packs littered around
and choked with cigarette ash.
Scales of moths fettered
over munch marks in its pocket.
"The Enforcer” we called it.
Reminds me of mud
slathered bloominggails
munched on by caterpillars.
Those are the stems that seemed to stalk.
Petals writhing with wrinkles,
strains of color sprouting from moist
cigarette ash. That’s the overcoat.
and choked with cigarette ash.
Scales of moths fettered
over munch marks in its pocket.
"The Enforcer” we called it.
Reminds me of mud
slathered bloominggails
munched on by caterpillars.
Those are the stems that seemed to stalk.
Petals writhing with wrinkles,
strains of color sprouting from moist
cigarette ash. That’s the overcoat.
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